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Post by ariel on Jul 19, 2010 20:43:33 GMT -5
DAViE left me and is now off doing his planned fame-whoring!
Oh well...I guess that leaves room for I ❤ GHOSTiE 2!!! :0
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Post by Admin on Jul 19, 2010 20:46:49 GMT -5
Confessional - DAViE
Eric is so desperately trying to become the star of this show, and it's obvous and embarassing. He looks like a train wreck with the way he's acting.
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Post by CLAYBAYBAY on Jul 19, 2010 20:47:35 GMT -5
CritiquesFirst off, I need to addresss. Moon, you didnt show up AGAIN! Access denied. Amanda, im sorry but youre officially ACCESS DENIED.Piddu, you are now officially in!Nick - Your entry was funny , but kind of jumped around a bit. You had some very funny parts in there though ,the only thing is you acted different in your story then you do on Here. Let your nickjaro reality star attitude show here! also you presented your story very weird it was hard to read, but decent job overall. Joey - Joey, your entry upset me. Because it was like a PERFECT scene, out of the PERFECT STORY..but thats the thing, it was just a scene! You didn't put enough effort into it and didn't expand on it. Not good. Massie - I loved yours! I really love how you didn't make each part of your story un balanced, you gave each section (at the house, the date, the choice) etc the same amount of attention which was great! I found it funny and very entertaining. Davie - Your entry also had me CRACKING UP. I found it hilarious, and it was very well written until the end..I feel like you kind of gave up on the end a little bit because you just rushed it, I know you weren't feeling well but the ending took a toll on your story overall. Jordan - You did pretty good. I liked your different approach and it was well written you had great ideas, but it felt like it was the supertrailer of the finale not the finale, you didnt give enough. Piddu - OMG your story...LOL so funny, so crazy, the only issue is it was a bit unrealisitc. I love how you included your brother too it was really funny, but it kind of jumped all over the place a bit, however it was the funniest. Eric - Eric, you were LATE!!!!! But other than that, on to your story. I feel your story was funny and had alot of good pictures and graphics, however I feel it relied a bit on that. If you took away all the extra funny pics, how much of a story did you really have there? Seemed funny but a bit rushed. Decent, but not great. The winner of this challenge , is....................... Massie! Congratulations, I loved your story and you are safe from eliminations this week! Eric, because you were late, I'm calling you down to the bottom. Massie, please choose 2 people to join Eric in the bottom 3.
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Post by Admin on Jul 19, 2010 20:48:20 GMT -5
*walks to the bathroom to take a piss*
WTF
Confessional - DAViE
So I need to take a piss, and I walk in on MASSIE GIVING NICKJARO! I knew she liked younger guys, but this is rape! This is just my chance to get her arrested and eliminated from this competition, brb calling 911
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Post by Admin on Jul 19, 2010 20:50:14 GMT -5
I really dont wanna play anymore, I'm wasting my time, and energy. I am sick, and did that masterpiece in 20 minutes, and you wanna pull this shit? Go fuck yourself Clay, I control my own destiny, I QUIT
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Piddu
Super Contributor
Status: Banned
Posts: 774
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Post by Piddu on Jul 19, 2010 20:50:39 GMT -5
confessional: my story was the best! haters gonna hate though
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Post by Prince Eric on Jul 19, 2010 20:50:58 GMT -5
Confessional: 1: Drake isn't gay nor bisexual 2: Why Eric is telling us about his personal feelings I don't Know 3: Eric is trying to put on a front to seem like the star of the show when it's really being fake All stars can get implants, but the best stars don't need them 1. HOW DO YOU KNOW HE ISN'T... JUST BECAUSE IT DOES NOT SEEM THAT WAY DOESN'T MEAN SHIT, ARE YOU SLEEPING IN HIS BED ROOM? (YOU WISH)
2. BECAUSE I CAN! IDIOT...
3. EAT ASS.
4. GO HOME WEAK ASS ZEBRA!
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massie
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Sugar and Spice
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Post by massie on Jul 19, 2010 20:52:30 GMT -5
Davie and Jrox are busy stroking each others dicks and starting rumors. They can go up for elimination. Plus Davie keeps wanting me to jerk him off, it is annoying.
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Post by Admin on Jul 19, 2010 20:54:52 GMT -5
Massie is a jealous bitch with a busted weave.
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Post by Prince Eric on Jul 19, 2010 20:55:36 GMT -5
I really dont wanna play anymore, I'm wasting my time, and energy. I am sick, and did that masterpiece in 20 minutes, and you wanna pull this shit? Go fuck yourself Clay, I control my own destiny, I QUIT Davie you just said you didn't try, don't quit I mean Eric will probably be going home :/ shut the fuck up! and why am I in the bottom anyways? THIS GAME IS BULLSHIT!!!!
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