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Post by ariel on Aug 17, 2010 22:12:25 GMT -5
Ppl are going to get negative points for being late o-o.
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Post by CLAYBAYBAY on Aug 17, 2010 22:14:38 GMT -5
     Scene One - Scene one is to represent Nick, Eric, Massie, and Myself all beginning our journey in ghostie's game. We all line up to begin, just like in the game Candyland. Scene Two - Scene Two represents us mid racing through the competition, fighting to keep our image up and as you can see, Ghosties image is the best which is why shes in the lead, and Massie is no longer in the lead because her Image was broken. Scene Three - Scene Three kind of represents tonight, how we are all racing to the final finish, trying to prove to ghostie that our image is kept like hers, and we want to win this race! Scene Four - Scene four represents the outcome of the race! AFter long hard battles of keeping our images up, the winner Clay and the host Ghostie celebrate the long journey of having kept up images! This also represents the message board games in general, how we all compete in a board game in a way, trying to ultimately finish first and win in the end! |
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Post by Prince Eric on Aug 17, 2010 22:15:38 GMT -5
Confessional Me: OMG Why did Clay do CANDY LAND?  !!!! -sigh- |
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Post by CLAYBAYBAY on Aug 17, 2010 22:16:59 GMT -5
Just to be clear, I told Ghostie a long time ago I was doing Candyland so she knows i did not copy you eric.,
And Joey - My computer did restart, im on my moms laptop... which is why i dont have my signature blue text .
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Post by ariel on Aug 17, 2010 22:17:47 GMT -5
Where is nick???
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Post by CLAYBAYBAY on Aug 17, 2010 22:21:39 GMT -5
Confessional - Great, someone who hates me is "guest judging" .. how fair? hes trying to get points taken off of me 24/7 and obv is bias.. ugh
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Post by ariel on Aug 17, 2010 22:21:50 GMT -5
 I got this idea from Hansel and Gretel mixed with Alice and Wonderland inspiration.
Scene 1: Poor little Eric (cinnamoroll) skipped into a scary forest with thorny trees,on a quest to find Candy land! He was greeted by evil monsters with lasers for eyes, and ghosts who spit toxic black clouds, and purple demons that blew fire! Eric was very very scared, UNTIL Ghostie swooped from the skies and flew Eric OVER the evil monsters.
Scene 2: Eric and Ghostie have now flown over the scary forest,and they have met Jynx! Jynx is a good witch who knew how to get to Candy land.. She sprinkled good luck dust on them so they would not get harmed by any forest beasts, but she told them to beware of a greedy cat on the way there.
Scene 3: As Eric and Ghostie get closer and closer to Candy land, they see the greedy cat! He says "THE ONLY WAY YOU'LL PASS IS IF YOU GIVE ME A GIFT" Ghostie looks in her pockets but has NOTHING! Eric only has his lucky umbrella but nothing else... Eric and Ghostie try to run but the greedy cat blocks them! Eric realizes her must hand it over, and sadly hands over his umbrella, and him in Ghostie are allowed to pass.
Scene 4: Eric and Ghostie finally make it to Candy land! and Eric enters the house where is sweet treats await him! Ghostie eats the face of a of a ginger bread man LOL! and they live happily ever after.
I did this because I love fairy tales, and I really wanted to have fun with this challenge. My goal was to try and make it like a children's book, and make the readers feel like they were reading a fairy tale story.
THE END! I hope you enjoyed it.... ☠ THE SCENE: 14/20 ~Nice scene, nice storyline. I like how it was like a comic strip in the sunday papers. ☠ SCENE DESCRIPTION: 10/10 ~Superb storyline. It was very detailed and thorough like an actual story. |
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Post by CLAYBAYBAY on Aug 17, 2010 22:24:38 GMT -5
Good job Eric!
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Post by Prince Eric on Aug 17, 2010 22:25:35 GMT -5
Thank you so much Ghostie! Thank you Clay!
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Post by ariel on Aug 17, 2010 22:27:08 GMT -5
Scene One - Scene one is to represent Nick, Eric, Massie, and Myself all beginning our journey in ghostie's game. We all line up to begin, just like in the game Candyland. Scene Two - Scene Two represents us mid racing through the competition, fighting to keep our image up and as you can see, Ghosties image is the best which is why shes in the lead, and Massie is no longer in the lead because her Image was broken. Scene Three - Scene Three kind of represents tonight, how we are all racing to the final finish, trying to prove to ghostie that our image is kept like hers, and we want to win this race! Scene Four - Scene four represents the outcome of the race! AFter long hard battles of keeping our images up, the winner Clay and the host Ghostie celebrate the long journey of having kept up images! This also represents the message board games in general, how we all compete in a board game in a way, trying to ultimately finish first and win in the end! ☠ THE SCENE: 16/20 ~the candyland idea was a good inspiration and the scene was awesome. ☠ SCENE DESCRIPTION: 4/10 ~I know you had to rush them, but at least you had something written. Plus being late counts against you. |
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!!!! -sigh-