J-DAWG
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Post by J-DAWG on Dec 28, 2009 22:27:28 GMT -5
davie if im clay then how is my ip different than his ur not very smart are you your just good at making other people doing the work for you is all
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Post by CLAYBAYBAY on Dec 28, 2009 22:29:24 GMT -5
NOBODY POSTED FOR ME DAVIE. I AM ON MY SISTERS LAPTOP. BECAUSE HERS IS GETTING INTERNET CONNECTION, AND MINE ISNT.
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Post by Admin on Dec 28, 2009 22:31:31 GMT -5
That's funny. Would you like me to post your IP's information? It's all from a proxy.
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Post by ariel on Dec 28, 2009 22:56:58 GMT -5
Well, it looks like I was too late to complete this challenge. Luckily, I was not voted out. But, imma post mine anyway.
PLOTLINE: A girl comes back from the dead as a succubus and seeks revenge on those who caused her death. GENRE: Horror, Revenge CAST: ~Riley Roz->Charlize Theron ~Mr. Redford Roz->Christopher Walken ~Stephen Sinclair->Johnny Depp ~Blake Weathers->Rob Lowe ~Lucas Painter->Chace Crawford ~Justin Brown->Josh Duhamel ~Drunk Girl-Megan Fox (this role is perfect for such a talentless cunt) ....summary coming.
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Post by ariel on Dec 28, 2009 22:58:04 GMT -5
PLOT SUMMARY:
In a small town in south Virginia, there was a young woman who had her mind on getting through high school. She was an 18 year old virgin who was very shy and never had a boyfriend. Her name was Riley Roz and her life had been unsatisfying so far. At school, she was mocked each day by three other boys because she was considered an outcast by her peers, simply because she kept to herself all the time. These three guys were named Blake, Lucas, and Justin. People would laugh at her when she walked by and “accidentally” run into her in the halls to cause her physical harm. Riley was not really unattractive on the outside, but was considered so by her peers the way she carried herself in social situations. Basically she was fair game because she wasn’t popular to the three guys. She had never been to school parties or went out with friends, simply because she didn’t have any because of her shyness. The three guys were the worst; they would call her ugly and a slut when they would see her down the halls just to put her down. She was apparently seen as disgust to others, yet she had no idea why.
One day Riley went to school like every other day, going through constant hell like always. It was the middle of March on a Thursday. She only had her mind on getting out of this terrible school filled with terrible people and she never had to see those three guys again. Those three guys were the popular guys in school; they hung out with all the popular girls and threw and participated in parties that were filled with ruckus and a lot of alcohol involved. Sometimes even illicit drugs as well. During school that day, the three guys took it to another level with Riley. They framed her to make it look like she defecated all over the women’s walls. When Riley found out about the incident, she knew who it was that did it. However, she was such in shock that she ran out of the school with her heart pounding. She got in her car and drove off home, with tears streaming down her face. When she turned at the third block from her house, she went into cardiac arrest from the stress of the situation, not to mention the last four years of torment she received from her peers. She died almost instantly and crashed into a lamp post. However, her body was unscathed from the crash, but she remained dead due to her heart failure.
The next day there was a sadness that came over the school on what happened. Riley’s father, Mr. Roz, was furious at the events leading up to her death. He knew that Riley was being tormented at school and he kept berating her to tell the school authorities for it to cease. Riley didn’t do this because she knew the tormenting would not stop, in fact it might of gotten worse since that’s how people were at her school. The three guys: Blake, Lucas, and Justin were indifferent to her death. As time passed on, she was in the back of their minds as they moved on with their lives. But they eventually forgot about her as the college years rolled around. But the father knew who had done it since he was aware of her daughter’s situation. Mr. Roz knew who was at fault and vowed revenge upon the three guys who were responsible for his daughter’s early death. But he just didn’t know what to do exactly.
One day Mr. Roz was talking a walk in an empty pathway in the middle of a forest his family liked to visit when he noticed a well-dressed man passing by. The man introduced himself as Stephen Sinclair and talked suddenly of his daughter which took the father by surprise. Sinclair offered a way for the father to get back at those who made her daughter suffer, the father agreed and figured that the mysterious man must have mystical powers of some sort. They made the deal, and went their separate ways. The father returned to his home and the next morning he got a knock on the door. It was his daughter.
Mr. Roz was stunned. His daughter had been dead for three years and yet returned from the grave. Only she didn’t look the same, she looked obviously deathly and corpse-like with scars all over her body. Her eyes glowed red with fierceness. “I’m hungry” she said as she looked at her father. Mr. Roz took her in gave her something to eat. “I have a hunger that is unsatisfied” Riley claimed. Mr. Roz had an idea of what her daughter meant by this and offered to help her in any way possible. After all, he was just ecstatic that he had his daughter back, even though she looked like this.
Riley explained to her father that she was raised from the dead by the devil himself. She was a fallen angel, a succubus to be exact to seek revenge upon those who caused her death. She needed her father for living space and for hiding during the day so that she would cause harm to those that harmed her. Ironically, the devil aka Mr. Sinclair would draw in students who reveled in drugs and drinking and all kinds of partying to the very forest that he and Mr. Roz had made their deal. These students were to be Riley’s personal feast.
That night, a college party took place in the forest. The forest was a swell party hang-out since no one really went there for leisure and it was in the middle of nowhere. Plus, people could do many things without being seen. Blake Weathers was there, one of the boys who tormented her. A drunken girl disappeared deep in the forest without knowing where she was going. She fell and landed at Riley’s feet where she appeared to be waiting for her. Back at the party, the drunken girl returned and lured Blake in the back of the boards. They were alone and then she kissed him and then fell in deeper with the lip-locking. All of a sudden, as the girl playfully was biting down on his lips, she bit hard, taking the flesh off his jaw. Blake shrieked and stumbled back. The girl peeled off a flesh mask to reveal the scarred horror of the succubus and then jumped on him and dug her razor-sharp fingers in his heart and tore it out. Then succubus Riley took out his wallet and any items that was found to her liking and kept them. Then she finished eating what was left of Blake Weathers.
It became a hobby of Riley’s to sneak into college parties and kill those who looked like they deserved a good killing. She would play devious tricks on the party goers like shoving a beer bong tube down their throats or shattering a marijuana bong right in their eyes and mouth. She cut off penises and mutilated vaginas. However, she only ate those who she knew would taste good. Since there was usually a fire at the party, she would fix herself a delicious roast of human flesh and of course, with beer flavoring. After she was done with the ravaging, Riley took items and clothes and other items that she felt like keeping and added them to their collection.
This went on for weeks and people were starting to grow weary of the forest, but the students still wanted to party. Lucas Painter and Justin Brown went to a different college then Blake, who went to a private college. Lucas and Justin went to a nearby university and planned a usual keg party with all the loose girls and druggy guys.
TBC...too tired to finish now.
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Post by joshploof on Dec 28, 2009 23:02:53 GMT -5
Ghostie, I REALLY REALLY REALLY wish you had come earlier because you would have won. Your challenge was AMAZING, and I said you were officially out, but after seeing how hard you worked on your challenge I can't leave you hanging. So I'll let you be back in the game. TOMORROW IS A DOUBLE ELIMINATION.
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Post by Admin on Dec 28, 2009 23:09:39 GMT -5
Just take Clay out. He was her replacement, and did nothing for his spot anyway. He's just there..
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Post by CLAYBAYBAY on Dec 28, 2009 23:16:21 GMT -5
YES I DID, I AM J777'S REPLACEMENT, NOT GHOSTIES. GHOSTIES REPLACEMENT WAS BLUE BECAUSE DLOVE AND I BEAT BLUE AT THE CROSSWORD CHALLENGE. SO SHUDDUP.
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Post by Admin on Dec 28, 2009 23:20:38 GMT -5
YES I DID, I AM J777'S REPLACEMENT, NOT GHOSTIES. GHOSTIES REPLACEMENT WAS BLUE BECAUSE DLOVE AND I BEAT BLUE AT THE CROSSWORD CHALLENGE. SO SHUDDUP. You don't even have internet to play with. *sigh* Whatever.
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victorcalling
Junior Member
Sgt. Madonna reporting for duty!
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Post by victorcalling on Dec 28, 2009 23:22:12 GMT -5
omggggggggggggggg
FUCK U JROX I HOPE UR NEXT OUT U LITTLE PUSSYASS PIECE OF SHIT.
I DIDN'T GET NO FUCKING IM!!!!!
FUCK YOU DAVIE. FUCK YOUUUUU I DIDN'T GO AGAINST ANY FUCKING BODY.
YOU'RE ALL FUCKIN TRIPPIN. FUCK YOU ALL. FUCK YOU ALL!!!!
DESTINEY I HOPE U WIN!!!!!! U DESERVE TO WIN NOT LIKE THESE OTHER FUCKS THAT THINK THEY'RE SO GREATT.
FUCK U JROX.
I SWEAR TO GODD I NEED ANOTHER FUCKING SHOT 'CAUSE I'M GETTING ELIMINATED ON SOME BULLSHIT.
FUCK YOU ALL!!!!!!! FUCK THIS BULLSHIT GAME!!!! UGH UR ALL FULL OF SHIT.
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