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Post by joshploof on Dec 28, 2009 22:13:35 GMT -5
For todays challenge, I want you all 5 to use your imagination to the FULLEST.
I had a very intense magical dream last night, and it made me really love the dream world. Much like the new movie avatar uses a completely new imaginative beautiful and vivid world. I want you all to create ME a dream world, create me a dream make me visualize this world you make with your words, make me see the most beautiful, magical place every with words. Whoever does this best, will be executioner.
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Post by CLAYBAYBAY on Dec 28, 2009 22:22:45 GMT -5
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Post by Prince Eric on Dec 28, 2009 22:42:03 GMT -5
So words? Graphics won't matter?
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Post by joshploof on Dec 28, 2009 22:45:06 GMT -5
So words? Graphics won't matter?
I would prefer no graphics/pictures at all. Music is fine but I want you to create this world not use pictures and go off of that. |
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Post by joshploof on Dec 29, 2009 15:47:46 GMT -5
REMEMBER:
I will be checking EVERY SINGLE ONE OF YOURS for plagiarism because this challenge is so easy to plagiarize someone from the internet. I WILL BE CHECKING EACH AND EVERY SINGLE LINE for plagiarism, if I find ANY of yours was taken from someone else, you're eliminated on the spot.
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Post by Prince Eric on Dec 29, 2009 19:22:29 GMT -5
Please play this beautiful sound of the ocean before you proceed:
Welcome to Agua Marina. THE OCEAN PLANET[/size][/color][/u]  A planet that is 100% water. Nothing but tides and waves crashing and splashing,and you can hear the roar of the rough,cold,chilling waters,and thunder, and feel the strong gusts of winds,and see lightning striking the sea and then disappearing.
But below the angry ocean was a land, A land of so many wonders and beautiful creatures! The main creature is the Sea Nymph. The Sea Nymph is the equivalent of human beings on earth. Sea Nymphs are much different than humans though, because Sea Nymphs have gills and fins,and they do not just come in two sexes but one! All Sea nymphs are both male and female and are all pan-sexual. Their sex is not like humans sex at all,When they reach a high level of emotion toward each other, and fall in love ,two Sea Nymphs combine together, and join where they experience the highest level of ecstasy and an orgasm ten times better than any humans! They also live for eternity and never die, how ever when a Sea Nymph does something evil, such as murder or rape, they will be banished by King Poseidon and go to the very dark depths of the sea near the core of Agua Marina where the predators like snap fish,biter aces,killerdines,rat fish,bottom feeders,blood thirsters,vampiro fish,sea demons,spiney's,leeches,piranhas,and cutter sharks live. All those creatures named are the most dangerous animals of Agua Marina, and either live deep in the dark depths near the core, or are hunted by Warrior Sea Nymphs to be kept as trophies in King Poseidon's Palace, or placed in museums.
Sea Nymphs do not have races but they come in different colors of the rainbow! Some are red,blue,green,purple,yellow,and more. Sea Nymphs use sea shells and pearls as money, the more beautiful pearls and seashells they have the more rich they are. There are also many creatures in Agua Marina just like on Earth. Agua Marina has whales,dolphins,sting rays and crustaceans. The Royal family is a family of three, King Poseidon,Queen Aquaria,and Princess Loreal. The Palace is he most beautiful thing you will ever see! Warrior Sea Nymphs guard the giant doors of Poseidon's Palace, Mermaids lie around with their breasts revealed and their fins covered with pearls,seashells,silver,and gold, as they sing their songs and play the harp. Poseidon's Palace is like a aquarium because the walls are large aquariums with many kinds of colorful fish like clown fish and blue tang fish. In Princess Loreal's beautiful room was her gigantic pet Orca who sung her to sleep.
In the village there were many magical things. coral changed colors,fish and sea creatures talked,and topless mermaids sung beautiful songs! Young Sea Nymphs swim and play around Agua Marina and play with the jelly fish, and eat candy flavored kelp and seaweed.Agua Marina is not just happy and fun though.
In the evil pitch black depths near the core lives King Poseidon's evil twin Havoc! Havoc owns two giant squids and if you get to close to the depths the squids will capture you with their tentacles and take you under for eternity,Where there is nothing but blindness, because it is so dark, and has vicious creatures.Havoc is all black with yellow eyes and he was cursed to be the ruler of the blind and evil depths after he murdered his and Poseidon's own mother and father which were the King and Queen before Poseidon took over,and banished his brother to rule over the blind and evil depths.
Havoc can not come up above to Agua Marina's highlands though. He must stay below the boundaries and he can only rule those who have committed horrible crimes.Sea Nymphs are not to be mistaken with mermaids and mermen. Mermaids and mermen are mix breeds between Sea Nymphs and human beings that Poseidon made for fun. Mermaids and mermen are used for sex and music.
Now imagine that you were apart of this enchanted land of the ocean. Would you be apart of the royal family?, and dance among Poseidon's Palace and luxuriate in seashells,pearls and richest,and eat the best meals,watch the best entertainment,own a mermaid or a mermen and have them do what ever you want,own a whale or a pet dolphin,and have magical powers?
Or would you be just a regular Sea Nymph?, and own a small pet star fish,play among the fields of the jelly fish,watch coral change colors,talk to sea animals,eat candy flavored kelp and seaweed,start a family of all shades of the rainbow,have lots of sex,save up riches to buy a mermaid,and enjoy your life for eternity? Or perhaps you like the dark side and want to be one of Havoc's servants?,and live in the deep heated and dark depths near the core,have leeches,worms,or sharks as pets,do evil and mean crimes,watch sea volcanoes explode,and be a villain for eternity?
No matter what you choose its your dream. Sit back and visualize Agua Marina and be what ever you want to be, as you swim the seas and see,feel,breathe,and taste the beautiful wonders.
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Post by J-DAWG on Dec 29, 2009 20:37:12 GMT -5
You’re in bed, reading a novel that you have heard much about. It’s midnight in December. Your eyes get heavier and heavier. You close them for less than 5 seconds. You open them quickly almost like a flinch. When you open them you see the sun’s rays burst through your window. The smell of crisp bacon and toast brings you downstairs. A plate already made for you even a post it on it with your name and a note “Have a nice day.” No one is home; you yell for names and get no replies. You go upstairs and do your daily routine. You go downstairs and take a step outside and what is this? You feel warm grains of sand roll across your toes. You look down, your not wearing the clothes you put on. You have a swim suit and a T-shirt on. The feel of the ocean’s mist and the smell of the ocean’s breeze makes you forget to ask yourself what’s going on? You turn around to go back into your house, but it is gone. For some reason you’re not acting the way you know you should be. You want to look around, but the roaring sound of the ocean draws you closer and closer to it. You decide to take a dip while you think of a plan. You take a dive underwater, a camera pops in your hands you take a picture. You feel the oxygen in your lungs depleting so you swim to the top of the water. As you swim to the top the temperature of the ocean seems to be dropping. All of a sudden your toes and fingers become numb as you emerge from the top of the ocean. You’re surrounded by ice, the ocean froze over. The sun glistening over the ice. You go where the beach once was. Again your clothes change to a light winter coat, gloves, a hat, and a pair of jeans. Snow everywhere, where the sand used to be, for miles and miles. You pick some up the first thought that comes to your mind is “the fluffiest snow I’ve ever seen.” The weird thing was your footprints in the snow disappeared as more snow filled it up… yet no snow was falling from the light blue sky. It almost seemed impossible with not one cloud in sight. You turn to the right and see penguins sliding happily with their families and you turn to your left and see a polar bear with her cub. This place is so peaceful so serene it was truly paradise. You began to get hungry you were craving Chinese. It pops up in front of you just like that. This place… this universe…. it feels like it was made for you. You were beginning to get cold you like cold weather but this is too extreme. The place changed again. Into a fall like setting. The warm colored leaves danced as the wind blew softly. As you watched the leaves blow away you realized, you could have anything you want. You sat down and ate your food and wanted to go back to the beach. Of course you end up there with your swim suit. A surfboard lands in front of you. You look out into the sea and see waves, some of the biggest you have seen. You don’t know how to surf but you go out there anyways. You get on a wave and you’re surfing. You don’t know how, but you are! I can do anything here…anything. This is my place, my universe and it’s time to have fun. You jump off your board and go underwater. You can breath, the water is so clear you can see everything. Bright colors of coral everywhere. Fish swimming at the bottom of the sea of all different species. You want to touch one of them, but as all fish they will just swim away. Then all at once hundreds of different fish come together up to you close enough for you to touch them. You stare at them in astonishment. It was overwhelming and after all this time why aren’t you drowning. You are breathing under water! Still you swim up and start heading for the beach. You relax on a lounge chair drinking a pina colada. You think of how wonderful this place is. Then you think about home. Then you wonder “where is everyone?” You start panicking going to different places everywhere. The rain forest filled with birds, the desert hot and dry you see camels in the distance, then you think of home your true paradise. You’re there and no one’s home. You go upstairs and lay down in your bed you cry until you fall asleep. You wake up and smell bacon and toast again. You go downstairs and see the same plate with the same post it. You throw the plate across the room and your girlfriend comes behind you.
“What is your problem I made you breakfast and you throw it across the room?!?” Your eyes widen you squeeze her and lift her up. You give her a kiss and then you go back upstairs and go do your daily routine.
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Post by Prince Eric on Dec 29, 2009 20:58:16 GMT -5
I am signing in!
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Post by CLAYBAYBAY on Dec 29, 2009 20:59:30 GMT -5
CELEB CITY
Josh Ploof is on a tour around Hollywood, visiting the hot spots, and the national landmarks. He is only here for 2 more daysm so he wants to make the most of it. His boyfriend, Trevor, was being a lazy bum earlier that morning, and didnt want to leave the hotel room. This didnt stop josh though, as he went out to check out Mount Lee, and much more. It is a very sunny day, clear and the sun is blazing, but not too hot. There is a slight breeze going, so the Temperature is completely comfortable. As he approaches Mount Lee, Josh decide to take a little detour. He starts taking pictures of the H O L L Y W O O D sign, when he gets curious about whats inside. He goes around to the “h” of the Hollywood sign, and suddenly, everything goes blank. Josh’s mind starts spiraling, and spinning, and he doesn’t know where he is or what he is doing. All he sees is flashes of color and mixed voices which he cant quite make out. Then, he finds himself laying on a bench, in the middle of a plaza.
Josh gets up, and starts to walk around. He is completely distraught, and doesnt know where he is at all. He smells foodstands, as he sees little stands selling drinks and food, like you would see at a fair. The plaza is bright colored. The stones on the sidewalk are all rainbow colored, and have sparkles all over. The sky is also assorted colors, and not the normal blue. The clouds are different shades of pink, and red, and green. The stars are in the sky, even though its only 1pm. He doesnt see anybody walking around, but can hear faint laughs and conversations coming from somewhere. He hears music, but he doesn’t see any people. He gets out his cell phone, to call his sister Jordanna, only to realize his phone is completely blank. Then, suddenly, he sees Nicki Minaj walking down the street, carrying a Coach bag, and her weave is in curlers. Josh is starstruck, and doesn’t know how to react. He slaps himself a few times in the face, to make sure he doesnt make an ass of himself, in case this were a dream. “NICKI!!! OMFG!!!” he yells, and chases after her. “How the hell did you get in here?” she replies, and screams for security. Three big black men in suits pick josh up, and take him to an interrogation room.
“How did you get here, son?” They ask. The men look very intimidating. They are tall, looks like about 610. They have black shades on, and little earpieces in their ear. The look at Josh, straight in his eyes, and they dont disconnect. “I was just taking pictures of the Hollywood sign and… “ josh babbles, scared and nervous. "Dont give me that bullshi.." one of the men begins to say, but gets cut off. “STOP!” Gia Lynn yells. “Let him go” she says, grabbing josh by his arm, and leading him out to the plaza again. “Omg, Gia, besides the fact that I have a hard on right now from meeting you, where the FUCK am I?” josh asks. “You’re at Celeb City baby” Gia replies. “This is a place where all celebs go. Usually outsiders arent allowed. I saved you back there because this place is SO fun, and I think other people deserve to share the fun, Wanna take a look around?” she asks Josh. “YEAH” he replies, and they get in a limousine and begin to drive around the town. Now, before we go anywhere, i have to help you out. There are laws here in Celeb City you must obey. By law, YOU MUST WEAR designer clothes. Anything else is PROHIBITED. Josh looks out his window in AMAZEMENT. He realizes the limo is hovering, and not riding on the ground. He sees stores, like Juicy, Neil Lane, Kitson, and more. He sees high class restaurants, night clubs, and more. Its like a gigantic city with everything like a Hollywood night out. “How the hell is ALL OF THIS fitting into the Hollywood sign on the side of Mount Lee?” Josh asks. “You ask a lot of questions sweetie, just enjoy this wonderful place!” Gia yells. They pass Nicki Mina again. “I used to love her, but shes the one that got me sent to security” Josh says. “Nicki, hop in here!!” Gia yells, and Nicki gets in the limo with them. “Sorry about earlier hun, I didn’t know you were cool with Gia I thought you were an intruder” Nicki says. “A lot of nikkas come up in here tryin’ to jock my swaggga” she tells josh.
Josh continues looking around, and is complete disbelief. It is a beautiful, vibrant city with all the restaraunts, stores, and celebs just walk around like its their own neighborhood. "Okay, we need to get you all dressed up!" Gia says, and takes Josh in to Neil Lane, and buys him 6 or 7 amazing, classy outfits for him to try on. “Look, theres heartbreaker, lets soak her!!!!” Josh says, and throws a giant waterbalooon out the window, and soaks Heartbreaker. "i never liked that bitch either. Youll see why on I Love Money 1" gia tells josh. “Hey, should he go to The Basement tonight?” Nicki says. “Hell yeah hes going!” says Gia. “Okay, Josh, you are going to go home with me, gonna get ready, and tonight we are going to take your Celeb City Virginity!” Gia says.
Gia leads josh into her home, and Josh is amazed. He goes to the bathroom, and checks his phone one more time. Its on, but with No service. He pulls out a video camera, and starts recording himself. “Alright, I honestly don’t know whats going on. Im in this place called Celeb City, which is hidden INSIDE the Hollywood sign on mount lee. Ive already met Gia and Nicki Minaj, ive seen celebs all over the place, this place is like a Dream world. I keep trying to tell if it’s a Dream or reality, but it seems so real. “JOSH!” gia screams, and josh stops recording the video, and goes out in the hallway. “ready to go?” she asks him, and shes looking super fine. “yeah” he says, and they get in her car this time. They drive around the plaza, and arrive at a GIGANTIC nightclub called “the basement”. Josh looks around, andsees stars like Riahanna, Christina Aguleria, Beyonce, Shakira, and more. Amazed, he goes over to the bar with Gia and starts doing shots. “so you having fun?” gia asks him. “HELL YEAH! All my dreams are becoming reality!” he yells back. Suddenly, the club gets quiet. Music begins to play.
Lady Gaga emerges from the ground, and pops up on stage. “Whatsup everybody!!!” she yells, as all the celebs and guests yell back. “Ive been hearing a lot of gossip lately, about this newbie named Josh Ploof! So come on up her Josh!” She yells, and the music cranks back up. Josh walks up, and begins dancing with Lady Gaga. Beyonce joins in, and so does Rihanna, and everybodys grinding and busting.Frenchy tries to teach Josh some pole moves. Liquor is poured, sex is served, and Josh passes out.
Josh wakes up the next morning, laying naked in his hotel bed, with his boyfriend Trevor sleeping right beside him. "Im naked... where the hell am i.. wtf" Josh says out loud. "Of course youre naked babe, why wouldnt you be?" Trevor says. "Well, i mean i know im naked but like...what happened to celeb city?" Josh says. "Babe, whats wrong with you?" Trevor says.
Josh explains to Trevor EVERYTHING he has experienced the last 24 hours. From the moment he woke up on the beach, to the moment he passed out. "Um...i think you need to lay back down." He says to Josh. "NO, im going back there!" josh says, putting on some clothes. "NO, YOU ARE GOING TO SPEND THE DAY WITH ME!!!" TREVOR YELLS, IN ANGER. Josh says nothing, but gets in his car, and leaves. Josh drives up to Mount Lee, meanwhile ignoring 24 calls from Trevor. Josh goes up to the "H" again, and this time Trevor followed Josh up there, and saw him dissapear. Trevor freaks out, and follows josh IN to Celeb City. Josh arrives at the same Plaza again, and quickly realizes Trevor is following him. "WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?!" Josh screams. "ARE YOU FUCKING TWO TIMING ME YOU FAKE BITCH?!" Trevor says, in a ghetto accent getting really pissed. "I dont have time for you, SECURITY!!!!" Josh yells. Security quickly picks Trevor up, and Ejects him back into reality. "This is not over..." Trevor says to himself, with his teeth clenched.
Josh walks over to Gias house, and goes in, without knocking. He sees Gia sitting on her couch naked. She spots Josh, and doesnt even bother to put any clothes on. "So, did you have fun last night?" Gia says. "Um, why was i at my house this morning, and not here?" Josh asks. "You have to go back at night silly, you cant be here 24/7 unless you live here" Gia says. Their conversation is interupted by screams heard from outside.
MEANWHILE
Trevor is on Mount lee, pissed and raged. He begins to pour gasoline, all over the hollywood sign, and the surrounding ground. He then says "Hasta la vista, Joshy" and flicks a match, immediately infusing the sign with flames.
"FIRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!EVACUATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Gia and josh run outside to see what all the comotion is about, and they both stop in their tracks .Horror is stricken through their bodies. The sight they look upon, is horrible. All the buildings are burning down smoke fills the air. The air is full of smug and tar and debret. The beautiful colored sky is now a DARK, bloodshot red, and the colorful clouds are now charcoal black.
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Post by Admin on Dec 29, 2009 20:59:34 GMT -5
"Open your eyes" a voice says to you, while you're in a tranquil slumber.
Your vision is blurred from your long rest, as you open your eyes, From your blurred vision, and your groggy senses; you see something unusual. Your surroundings are not what you're used to. You expected yourself to be awake in your bed, and your mother the one waking you. But you aren't in bed, you're not even home. You're in an unfamiliar place, you're nowhere you can imagine. This place is blurry, but finally, you can see clearly.
You feel something fine and powdery like under your feet. A light light blue sand like material is under you. You wonder if this is sand, but as far as you know, there is no such thing as blue sand. Looking around you, you're unable to tell if it is day time or night time, you look into the sky and see the sky is different shades of red, ranging from pink, to bright orange, the colors mixed together look beautiful. It appears like the sun is setting, but you notice, there is no sun. There are many bright stars, as if it were a beautiful crystal clear summer night. The stars glimmer and shine beautifully, they look very close to this place.. this world.. Looking around, you see you're on what appears to be a small island. Around you, what you believe to be is water glimmers a brilliant yellow.
You can't help but say out loud "This is beautiful", your voice echos, and the world seems to react to it. The sand turns from light blue, into a deep purple color. The water slowly seems evaporate, and a sparkling steam leaves the ocean into the air You can feel someone; something, is watching you, you turn around to see an ominous figure behind you. You're unable to tell what it is. A human, a ghost, a monster? It is shaped like a human, but has no distinct features that allows you to tell what gender it is. It's skin, is a clear, almost as if it were made of water, its face expressionless, it simply stares at you. "Beautiful?" asks the figure. Before you can respond, you begin to sink, the sand turns into quicksand, and again changes color yet again, this time into a shade of black. You fall into this black "sand".
You fall deep into this sand. You begin to think you're drowning, as you feel yourself losing oxygen, choking almost, you suddenly are back on the island like land mass. However, things are very different. The sand is gone, revealing large jagged rocks all over. The brilliant yellow ocean, is gone, and you go to explore the changed landscape. Climbing down the rocks carefully, you find yourself in what was the ocean. A beautiful field is before you, beautiful plants in shades of red, all lay before you. As you continue to walk, the plants bloom large yellow flowers. You stop and admire the lovely flowers. Putting your face closely to the flower to examine it further, the flower begins to make a chirping noise,
This noise reminds you of the lullabys your mother sang to you when you were a child. Soon after, all of the plants around you begin to mimic this action, and bloom into beautiful flowers and chirp loudly. For some uncontrollable reason, you feel the urge to cry. You look around you, as if you need to worry about someone judging you, and you lay down and begin to cry. The flowers chirp the beautiful lullaby, and you cry alone. The ominous figure appears yet again. This time the figure approaches you, and comes closer to you, reaching his hand out, he tries to touch you. You jump away frantically, a rush of adrenaline comes to you, and you begin to run from the figure, with you in a panic, the world yet again reacts to you. The flowers stop chirping, the flowers seem to go back into the red plants, and the red plants sink into the ground. Soon you are far enough from the figure, where you look behind yourself and can no longer see it in the distance.
You stop and look around, the world is barren, other then the beautiful sky. At this point you begin to worry, you feel isolated in this strange place. You wonder if this is a dream or not. In a panic you cry out for help. The only sounds are the echo of your own voice. The world reacts to your cries again for some reason, and the land under your feet rises, higher and higher, to the point where it's tall as a mountain. You are now at the what would be on earth, ozone layer of this planet, you're reaching the sky, the beautiful red sky.
"Are you afraid?" the ominous figure appears before you again, this time in front of you. You begin to fill with rage, "Where the hell am I?" you snap at the figure. The figure seems to evaporate into the sparkly steam, and reveals a mirror reflection of you. Oddly, you don't seem that surprised from this. Your mirror reflection clenches it's heart in pain. As if trying to warn you of something.
Appearing as if from nowhere, a gate appears. "Do you seek freedom?" asks your mirror reflection. Uneasily you step before the gate. And look back at your mirror reflection, which now has tears of blood down it's face. You touch your own face, because of the reflection, and can feel the blood rushing from your own eyes. You step froward, and open the gate.
A feeling of warmth envelops you as you enter, you see your mirror reflection fade away, and suddenly, your life flashes before your eyes. You see the happiest, saddest, worst, best, moments all through your life flash before you.
Suddenly your eyes open once more, this time, in a surrounding you can distinguish, a hospital room, you see your mother over your bed. And suddenly, you see nothing, you hear nothing, you feel nothing. It ends.
Dream world explaination:
The person in this story, "You", some how got into some kind of accident, and found themselves in the hospital, in a coma like state, on the verge of death. The person in their coma, receives hints that he is trapped in what his own idea of the perfect world is. The red sky signifies tragedy, and pain, while the blue sand and yellow ocean signifies peace and tranquility that is death. The world reacted to his emotion because it was created by this person.
When the person listened to the chirping of the flowers and began to cry, in actuality, it was his mother singing a lullaby to the person by his bedside. The red plants, also signify the coma, and being trapped in this "perfect world" for the remainder of his life, while the yellow flowers that bloomed from them, represent the peace:death, and how his mother would rather have him die, then rot away painfully in a coma.
The ominous figure was the person's interpretation on death/god, the ominous figure appeared, whenever he was on the verge of dying. Once the figure revealed itself to be a mirror reflection of the person, it was trying to explain, that this person would be trapped here forever because something happened to him
Finally the gate signified whether he would be trapped in his perfect dream land, a coma, or would accept "freedom" which translates to death.
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